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| By kitten_princess | ||||||
| 04 July 2007 | ||||||
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One of the scenes from When Harry Met Sally, in reverse. [unintentional, but cool.] I'm having trouble with my last lines at the moment, they never seem to fit. Comments, suggestions and help would be noted and loved. And there he is, A whispered suggestion of What a man could be - Lying in my bedsheets. Nested between pillow and bosom, He wriggles with the torpor of sleep, Just a bit closer to me. I lie there too, eyes wrenched open by insomnia's cruel jokes. Sleep is but a dream tonight.
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