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Pictures of Darfur (Pt 1-3)
By uche
04 July 2007
let's stir some Darfur-consciousness around here, rmemeber Sudan is Africa's largest country, with genocide raging on still


so great is the hunger
of bullets that blood
might simply not quench it…


1.
simply
by searching the clouds on her forehead
you think you can tell –  

see it locked in her bony arms
lips pinched tight
on her knobbly dark nipple

green flies buzz on its eyelids
she can’t even lift a hand
to shield her sickly eight-month-old  

and you think
you know the force of her agony?


2.
maybe you can tell –

as tears spike her eyes
her thoughts of
her baby with ancient skin
mouth crooked in hunger

her thoughts of
her husband
now mouldered meat
for loathed beasts
slain by boisterous soldiers –

even gauge the depth of sorrow
that scraped her soul?


3.
the beige baobab
leafless tower
props her up

the sun splinters
icicles in her heart
for strength

the truck thunders off
militia shooting at the sky

and the wind
snatches her husband’s
heap of ash.

Reviews
Hi Uche
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 4th July 2007
Another strong piece of work, which I am surprised as not had more reviews 
I worked in Darfur for a year and it's bad, very bad, fom my own point of view was that because of the terrible security sitution we could not do what we were there to do, travel etc was restricted and we had little or no protection, food convoys were ambushed and looted on many occasions, it ended up with many Aid Agencys withdrawing into their compounds or leaving all together. 
 
Uche, I put a piece on here in July 06 called Indifferent, might explain the lack of reviews??? 
 
Take Care Mate. 
Bernie
So sad -
Written by audrie (451 comments posted) 4th July 2007
so true, Mans inhumanity to man is something I have never understood, there is so much hate in this beautiful world.

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 4th July 2007
Powerful piece again Uche. The deliberately challenging nature of the words worked well - despair that we see only skin deep, the real horror running through the depths of everything. 
 
Away from the poetry for a moment. Are there any positives, any way out of this? 
 
Phil.
Hi Uche
Written by gshelme (152 comments posted) 4th July 2007
Once again I find your work both powerful and moving. 
 
Gill 

Written by uche (44 comments posted) 4th July 2007
Bernie, Phil, Audrie, & Gill thanks for feeling the Darfur piece; someone said Sudan is "Rwanda in Slow Motion" 
 
Phil, here's a link: www.darfurgenocide.org to adding your voice to the genocide targeted at black Sudanese by Arab Sudanese. Sudan in Arabic means Land of blacks, so the Arab govt is attempting to wipe out the dark-skinned africans 
 
let's hope the death toll doens't surpass Rwanda's
Hi
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 5th July 2007
Sorry Uche but I do not think it is as simple as you stated. 
 
what I do think is that there is a case for military intervention but any such intervention should be without western armed forces. 
 
I can see no reason IF the will was there that a military force comprising of African and non African states could not be got together. 
 
military force contribution. 
 
Jordan 
Algeria 
Tunisia 
Egypt 
Syria 
Indonesia 
Malaysia 
Morroco 
Pakistan 
Bangla-Desh 
 
if each of the above contributed 5000 troops you would have a intervention force of 50,000 plus 
military contribution from 
 
Nigeria 
RSA 
Angola 
Ghana 
Kenya 
Uganda 
Tanzania 
Zambia 
 
5000 troops from each of the above would when combined give you a peacekeeping force of 90,000 troops 
 
Funding would come from 
 
Saudi Arabia 
Iran 
UAE. 
 
SUPPORT, air basis in Egypt, Chad, Central African Republic could be used as air support/logistic bases. 
 
Western Contribution, this would consist of logistical support based outside Sudan. 
 
should the security sitution be such that food distribution etc could be safely carried out then aid agencys based in neighbouring countrys could go back in and re-commence their work 
 
as I said IF the will was there. 
Bernie 
 

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