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seen it all

By maipenrai

05 July 2007

I have seen it all
beggers and thieves
pimps and lowlife skunks,
holy priests
forgiving
the drunk in the gutter
then back to the rectory
for another little boy.

rich man in his limo
perverted in his cesspit mind,
poorman with his rickshaw
what a heavy load he pulls,
black or white
or the same to him
no respect
treat him like a slave.

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Written by uche (44 comments posted) 5th July 2007

like this, i can make out the passion in your tone;
the words seem to throw punches.

I do
Written by audrie (451 comments posted) 5th July 2007

appreciate the scorn in this, but isn't a male prostitute a flat chested whore?

Uche, Audrie
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 5th July 2007

Thanks for your comments, I am thinking of changing some of this, esp last 3 lines.

Bernie

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 5th July 2007

I liked parts of this - first verse, most of the second. The LOUD part threw me. Had me thinking, why? And then the end. I may be missing something, but it's like a cheap joke. For me it doesn't fit with the rest.

Could be me missing something.

Phil.

Thanks
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 6th July 2007

Phil, it as now been revised.
Bernie

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