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JOURNEY TO GRRRAAOWL
By prodigy
07 July 2007

 THIS IS ONE OUT-OF-CONTROL ROLLER COASTER RIDE!!!!!

 CHECK IT OUT!


 "Victory!!!" , I screamed.

  My mom just gave me permission (and money!) to ride on the newest roller-coaster ride at giant park! Yahooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!

 Oh. I forgot to introduce myself!
 I'm Peter Ashfeet. I'm 12. I'm a boy. AND MY MOM JUST ALLOWED ME TO - YAHOO!
 Ok. Calm down Peter. It's just a ride, i told myself as I ran towards the entrance to the park.
 As I entered I noticed many of my school friends were there too.
 One of them, with his back towards me , was blowing a bubble gum.
 Ben.
 Chewing and then blowing bubble gum is his favorite pastime.He chews 24/7.
 And believe me , you wouldn't want to see what his teeth look like.
 Never mind that now , I might lose my apetite.
    "Hey Peter!" he called out.
    "Hey Ben. Even you're gonna ride?"
   "Bet your boots I am!"

          We both entered the gate to the dungeon where the ride was.
 A big signboard read -
        THE RIDE OF DOOM - WILL YOU SURVIVE?
  We took screamcar no. 13. Ben believed that it was his lucky number!
  The man standing next to my screamcar pressed a giant button hard.
  And the ride began.

    Faster. Faster . Faster the screamcar zoomed in the dark dungeon.
    THIS WAS TOO COOL!!!
    Faster.Faster.Faster.
    Not cool.
    Ben was screaming in fear of falling (i think .)

             Something hit my head. I fainted.

    I woke up with the sun in my eyes.Maybe I was back outside.
    Yes I was.
    But this place was different.
   I was in a dirty alley full of big cats.
   One cat sniffed at me and said,
  "These human guys don't allow us dirty cats to come in their houses and this one appears out of nowhere and he's sleeping on my food , in my area!"
 THE CAT WAS TALKING !!!
 I fainted again.
 The cat made a confused face and said,
 "Did I say something?"
 

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