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| Re worked - A Precious Gift | |
| By audrie | ||||
| 09 July 2007 | ||||
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When I put out the first writing of this poem, I was expecting a lot of stick! A child sat in a garden alone beside a rose-bush, overgrown. Warm in the heat of the glorious sun feeling that she and nature were one when, out of the sunbeams six fairies flew Oh, their wings were a glorious shimmering blue. They danced and floated in a cloud of light entrancing the child in pure delight. As the beautiful creatures held her enthralled a marvellous love of these beings, so small, filled her with wonder and would be a part Of the magic forever sealed in her heart. She was too young to know what love was about But she wanted to sing and started to shout, to her mother and sisters, of what she had seen of the beautiful fairies and where they had been. But her mother and sisters, alas, would not listen, they laughed so much it made their eyes glisten. The child turned away and shed bitter tears. She knew she'd remember this moment for years and the precious gift that she had been given Would be locked in her heart, forever hidden. Until this moment when she has told you. Now, are you going to laugh at her, too?
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