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My Saviour and my Friend
By Seagull
10 July 2007
Poem or song lyrics?

At the foot of the cross

I could scarce believe my loss

My Saviour and my friend

Nailed there to die

As Jesus took the pain

His loss became my gain

My Saviour and my friend

Was born to die

 

As the truth was sinking in

I felt lighter without sin

My Saviour and my friend

He took it all

His wounds were plain to see

By his stripes he set me free

My Saviour and my friend

He died for all

 

Before he came to earth

Born of the Virgin birth

My Saviour and my friend

Had been with God

He came that we might live

Giving all He had to give

My Saviour and my friend

He came from God

 

Some still ask why He came

And will He rise again?

My Saviour and my friend

He came to save

I thought that all was lost

When He paid the final cost

My Saviour and my friend

Was in the grave

 

But I know He’ll come again

And in glory He will reign

My Saviour and my friend

Will rescue me

His death on the cross

Was victory not loss

My Saviour and my friend

Has set me free

Copyright 2007
http://angel-stories.co.uk

Reviews
I love this poem
Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 10th July 2007
I think Jesus was a highly evolved being, with unconditional love for his fellow men. A really beautiful soul, who gave us a creed to live by, but how many of us follow it? 
 
'Do as you would be done by.' Who could fault that for sheer common sense 
 
This is a lovely poem.
He "probably" existed...
Written by Talisker (1328 comments posted) 12th July 2007
As for the details, most of it was made up in the middle ages by hundreds of different scribes, conflicting wildly in detail. The chosen gospels are completely inaccurate and contradictory, yet millions swallow it as "truth". 
 
This "Jesus" myth is no better than any other fairy tale, only this one results in thousands of deaths, endless misery, meek acceptance of a shitty life in the hope of better things when we're rotting in a box, or a puff of smoke from a crematorium chimney... 
 
I don't find this stuff even harmless and "nice" - it's untrue and the basis for mass hysteria, just like the Koran and all the other wicked texts...why do you feel the need for this? Can you not just be a good human being in your own right, without giving some late iron age celebrity all the credit? 
 
Oli

Written by Seagull (174 comments posted) 12th July 2007
Oli 
 
Hmm... I've obviously mis-understood the purpose of putting work up for review probably in the same way that you don't understand the message of Christianity. But hey... I don't intend to ram my beliefs down other's throats. 
 
Chris

Written by Talisker (1328 comments posted) 12th July 2007
Let me enlighten you - the purpose is that the piece will be reviewed for form and content. The form of your piece is unremarkable, so I commented on the content. What's not to understand? 
 
I have no "beliefs" I rely on historical and scientific facts. I don't have any time for these "beliefs" in either fairies or gods. 
 
Please don't patronise though - I understand fine, then I reject.  
 
oli

Written by Seagull (174 comments posted) 12th July 2007
Didn't mean to patronise - not sure I did. I assumed from the tone of your original comment that you didn't understand but as you obviously do... great! 
 
I certainly have no wish to offend your faith. But to say you rely on historical facts and then say that Jesus 'probably' existed made me smile. 
 
Chris

Written by Talisker (1328 comments posted) 12th July 2007
No one has the slightest physical evidence to support a historical Jesus; no artifacts, dwelling, works of carpentry, or self-written manuscripts. All claims about Jesus derive from writings of other people. There occurs no contemporary Roman record that shows Pontius Pilate executing a man named Jesus. Devastating to historians, there occurs not a single contemporary writing that mentions Jesus. All documents about Jesus were written well after the life of the alleged Jesus from either: unknown authors, people who had never met an earthly Jesus, or from fraudulent, mythical or allegorical writings. Not one shred of archaeological evidence (unlike the Pharaohs or Caesar or any other "real" figure of the time). 
 
How do you explain this, Chris? What exactly is your evidence? 
 
To say that I "don't understand" something - when you don't know me - I find patronising in the extreme. This is always the refuge of "believers", to suggest that the subject is beyond their tiny minds - too big to understand, requires a "faith" which "god" has chosen not to bless them with.  
 
Also, for the record, I have no "faith" to offend. It is my intellect that you attack. This is far more precious to me than any mythical belief system. 
 
Oli

Written by Seagull (174 comments posted) 12th July 2007
Oli, 
 
I think it better I send you a pm. I don't think it appropriate to be having this debate on my belief versus yours here. 
 
Chris

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