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| Man or Minstrel | |
| By audrie | ||||||||||||||||||
| 10 July 2007 | ||||||||||||||||||
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Back in the seventies, my favourite folk singer was Gordon Lightfoot, a Canadian. I thought his ballads were beautiful, yet he had the reputation of downing a bottle of bourban every day, and various other self-defeating habits. I had painted a sort of double portrait of his, as both the man and the minstrel, and I wrote this poem on the back of the portrait. When I took my mother to see her brother in Toronto, and to see the Fall colours (glorious!) I took the painting with me. After three weeks of being too scared to do anything about it, and thinking I was too old for this lark, I suddenly said to my uncle that I was going downtown to find his office and hand it in there. My uncle said I would get caught up in the rush hour, it was then three thirty, but no, I had to go then or I would lose courage and have to take it home with me! I got on the tube, then a bus, and finally found this office. I entered and there were two girls sitting at desks. I asked if I could see the manager and one of them, his sister Bev, said he was on the phone and would I like to sit down for a moment. I had just sat down, when the outer door opened, and in walked the singer himself! He had only popped in to find the time of a next day appointment. He smiled and said 'hello' just as the manager came out to see what I wanted. I plucked up courage and asked Gordon if he would accept the painting. He did and thought the poem was great. He sat down and chatted for twenty minutes, such a very nice chap. The upshot was that the following year, he gave up the booze!!! I like to kid myself that it was the poem that helped him. Yeah, right! But a strange co-incidence! * Sorry Phil, a touch of 'religion' but my view of God has nothing to do with what passes for religion in this world! Man or minstrel, who can tell? Will he reach up to Heaven or make his own Hell? Will he set himself free or stay down the well? Our stars incline, but they don't compel. The minstrel knows that the climb is long If he wants to write his immortal song, But the man has aching, crying needs And at times he slips down among the reeds In the well, where the walls run down to the mine Of the poor lost souls slipping backward through time. Trying to find a road that has gone In an alien land where he doesn't belong. The minstrel must climb out if he can It's the only way that he can save the man, For the chain that binds them, heart to heart, Holds the link that can never be torn apart. But the weight of the man on the minstrel's soul Could stop him from reaching up to his goal. For the man has the power, will he try for the glory? Or just be another sad old story? The man has a heart that is strong and proud with a mind that soars above the crowd, And he won't let the minstrel fall in the well For he knows that they'll both end up in Hell! So he'll take up the challenge and haul on the chain While his desolate body cries out in pain. But he'll crawl up the chain links, one by one, Through the pitiless spin of a million suns. The reward at the end is eternal life, But he has to go through the pain and strife, Like the blade that is forged in the raging fire. The soul will quell the body's desire. So the beautiful man with the minstrel's soul Must first love himself, then he'll reach his goal. For the love of God lives on in us all. If he clings onto that, he will never need to fall. Man or minstrel, who can tell? Will he reach up to heaven or make his own Hell? Will he set himself free or stay down the well? Our stars incline, but they don't compel.
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