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Man or Minstrel
By audrie
10 July 2007
Back in the seventies, my favourite folk singer was Gordon Lightfoot, a Canadian.

I thought his ballads were beautiful, yet he had the reputation of downing a bottle of bourban every day, and various other self-defeating habits.

I had painted a sort of double portrait of his, as both the man and the minstrel, and I wrote this poem on the back of the portrait.

When I took my mother to see her brother in Toronto, and to see the Fall colours (glorious!) I took the painting with me.

After three weeks of being too scared to do anything about it, and thinking I was too old for this lark, I suddenly said to my uncle that I was going downtown to find his office and hand it in there. My uncle said I would get caught up in the rush hour,
it was then three thirty, but no, I had to go then or I would lose courage and have to take it home with me!

I got on the tube, then a bus, and finally found this office. I entered and there were two girls sitting at desks. I asked if I could see the manager and one of them, his sister Bev, said he was on the phone and would I like to sit down for a moment.

I had just sat down, when the outer door opened, and in walked the singer himself! He had only popped in to find the time of a next day appointment. He smiled and said 'hello' just as the manager came out to see what I wanted.

I plucked up courage and asked Gordon if he would accept the painting. He did and thought the poem was great. He sat down and chatted for twenty minutes, such a very nice chap.

The upshot was that the following year, he gave up the booze!!! I like to kid myself that it was the poem that helped him.  Yeah, right! But a strange co-incidence!

                                                          *   
Sorry Phil, a touch of 'religion' but my view of God has nothing to do with what passes for religion in this world!

Man or minstrel, who can tell?
Will he reach up to Heaven or make his own Hell?
Will he set himself free or stay down the well?
Our stars incline, but they don't compel.

The minstrel knows that the climb is long
If he wants to write his immortal song,
But the man has aching, crying needs
And at times he slips down among the reeds
In the well, where the walls run down to the mine
Of the poor lost souls slipping backward through time.
Trying to find a road that has gone
In an alien land where he doesn't belong.

The minstrel must climb out if he can
It's the only way that he can save the man,
For the chain that binds them, heart to heart,
Holds the link that can never be torn apart.
But the weight of the man on the minstrel's soul
Could stop him from reaching up to his goal.
For the man has the power, will he try for the glory?
Or just be another sad old story?

The man has a heart that is strong and proud
with a mind that soars above the crowd,
And he won't let the minstrel fall in the well
For he knows that they'll both end up in Hell!
So he'll take up the challenge and haul on the chain
While his desolate body cries out in pain.
But he'll crawl up the chain links, one by one,
Through the pitiless spin of a million suns.

The reward at the end is eternal life,
But he has to go through the pain and strife,
Like the blade that is forged in the raging fire.
The soul will quell the body's desire.
So the beautiful man with the minstrel's soul
Must first love himself, then he'll reach his goal.
For the love of God lives on in us all.
If he clings onto that, he will never need to fall.

Man or minstrel, who can tell?
Will he reach up to heaven or make his own Hell?
Will he set himself free or stay down the well?
Our stars incline, but they don't compel.

Reviews

Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 10th July 2007
No need to apologise Audrie. Your piece, your words - you're quite right, much of what passes for religion these days has little or nothing to do with anything resembling god.  
 
Must be quite a thrill to write a poem for someone like that and be able to present it to them. Shame you didn't post a copy of the painting (if you kept one) with this. 
 
Phil.
Hi
Written by maipenrai (780 comments posted) 11th July 2007
I remember Gordan Lightfoot well, he was good as is your poem, enjoyed the read. 
Bernie
Thanks, chaps,
Written by audrie (444 comments posted) 11th July 2007
for your comments.  
 
Yes, it was weird that I travelled 3,000 miles, waited three weeks and then suddenly at 3.30 knew I had to go then and there! If the manager hadn't been on the phone, I would have been in his office and missed Gordie, who only came in for a minute to get the time of his appointment. Kismet! But he did sing 'Rainyday People' for me at his concert in the Albert Hall, and I got a wink into the bargain!!! 
 
I didn't think to take a photo of the painting before handing it over. I really should have done. I've got another one full portrait, but it doesn't really apply to the poem.

Written by Talisker (1300 comments posted) 12th July 2007
Heartfelt stuff Audrie, no doubt. A nice story too. 
 
"Minstrel OR man"? Surely a minstrel is a man, no? If not, what is he, an alien?  
 
The religious overtones put me off too. Heaven, Hell, eternal life, a big bloke-in-the-sky with a beard, why not chuck in preposterous astrology to boot (our stars incline...) no scientific evidence of that either. You suggest to Mr. Phil that your religious views are not mainstream, but this has all the typical claptrap of most organised religions. 
 
As un homage to Mr. Lightfoot - if he likes it, perhaps that's all that matters.  
 
Oli :)
Okay, talisker,
Written by audrie (444 comments posted) 12th July 2007
I get your point. You also think of God as a big bearded bloke in the sky! Interesting! 
I think Mother Nature is more responsible for us than a concept of a 'man'. Don't forget the bible was written by 'men'! I think men made their 'God' in their own image, not the other way around. As I've already said, I think of god as a force of energy. 
 
As for astrology - have you ever actually STUDIED the subject? Like you, I was sceptical until I took a course on the subject. I'm not talking here about the silly newspaper sun signs. 
The sun signs are sometimes the least important of a person's character. As long as you have the correct time and place of birth, you find that the rising sign, and where the planets are placed (in which sign and house) you can get a very accurate picture of the character concerned. 
 
I usually find that with so many things, the people who rant against these things have NEVER studied the subject! 

Written by Talisker (1300 comments posted) 12th July 2007
There is no "subject" to study, just a preposterous suggestion that all people born on the same day have the same character traits. Utter nonsense. 
 
To study "astrology" is as to study "theology" there is no subject for me! Why would I study "The Tooth Fairy"??? I have far more important things to do in the real world. 
 
Probably best not to get into an argument though Audrie, as long as you're happy about it, thats good enough for me.  
:grin  
 
Oli

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 12th July 2007
How did this it at the back of a painting? was it very big or is your handwriting very small? I bet he was pleased. It's a good poem.
In reply
Written by audrie (444 comments posted) 12th July 2007
to both the latest comments. 
 
Fledermaus: The painting was 20" x 30", so not very big but enough to get the words onto the back of it. 
 
Tali: That is just the point, people may be born on the same day, but not all at the same time and in the same place! Even twins born either side of the cusp, can be quite different personalities. A firey Aries can be quite different to a gentle Pisces. 
 
Anyway, it is something we will have to agree to differ in, but not something to get steamed up about! Okay?

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