Great Writing - Home > Poetry > I am Set in a Burden to Sing of
READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 2003 guests online and 5 members online
Poetry
I am Set in a Burden to Sing of
By uche
12 July 2007
hope i'm not sounding cliche? the niger delta is nigeria's gold chest, yet it comprises the most despoiled communities...


I am accustomed to sing of love
Among the pristine marigolds of dawn,
Like some poet would serenade beauty
Cushioned by the leafy caress of maids.

Between this emerald boulevard of obeche,
I am set in a burden to sing of
The pastoral poetry of my kindred
Slaving hungry in the savannah of foods.

I am set in a burden to sing of
The gaping, black effigies of houses
Cuddled by long, careless arms of fire
Of the froth-clouded, hot-headed ruler;

I am set in a burden to sing of
Ugly scraps of bodies scattered about,
Limbs and arms mashed in the mud
By the toothed tread of military tanks;

I am set in a burden to sing of
The behemoth belch of fumes cramming
The nostrils of Ethiope and Forcados,
Choking the lungs of Nun and Escravos;

I am set in a burden to sing of
The dirge of dead yam fields and barren barns,
The murmur of slick-smeared mangroves,
The baleful breath of fish like bottle.

I am set in a burden to sing of
Sore-eyed boys and girls in sunlit scramble
For crooked, rusted pipes spewing
Yellowed water like gonorrhoea-pained penis;

I am set in a burden to sing of
How mothers rumple the peace of their brow
At the slightest warble of wings above,
Like Heaven’s bread will plop in their laps;

I am set in a burden to sing of
The haste of fathers breeding cobra brood;
The wait, like Simeon’s, measured and pregnant
As their dissolution of time in alcohol;

I am set in a burden to sing of
Darkness – quotidian dictator of our homes,
The groaning pipelines beneath our earth
Promising barrels of crude abundance;  

I am set in a burden to sing of
The limping cock, the mangy dog,
The one-eyed goat, the wounded pig;
The grim graffiti of sickness and sadness;

I am set in a burden to sing of
The smashed-to-bits dugout canoe drifting
On the salted spine of scorched creeks,
And bones of fish fossilised for future;

I am set in a burden to sing of
The hunched histories of Oloibiri,
Ogoni, Odi, Umechem and Egbema;
The looming hurricane in their slow rebirth;

I am set in a burden to sing of
The nebulous Niger, the foaming flood –
But my voice is the cracked flute, shattered urn;
Its timbre wafted as ash on time’s wind.
 

Reviews

Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 12th July 2007
Gosh... In spite of your introduction I was expecting a poem about pride about your homeland. The number of syllables wasn't very regular, but it seemed to have some rythm nevertheless. Especially the first and the last stanzas are strong. 
Uche
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 12th July 2007
you describe a nightmare my friend, it is good that you bring to the attention of a wider audence the facts of life, but what is the answer Uche? 
Bernie
insightful
Written by uche (44 comments posted) 13th July 2007
fled, mai, thanks for the insight 
u won't believe it, mai, that we nigerians eat shit, without resisting, though we whine, perhaps this is why we are called happiest people on earth?
Sad
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 13th July 2007
Your poem carries the message of great sadness, and I am sure that most of the sadness in your part of the world is caused by man's inhumanity to mankind, as with everywhere else. We hear a lot about corruption in Nigeria, including children being stolen or abducted. Is it corruption in your country which is leading to such poverty with ordinary people? You bring your message home in a powerful way, but I don't really like the continual repetition of the first line of the verse. I think you could have varied the lines in an interesting way.
Hi Uche
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 13th July 2007
I have worked in several African countrys from Malawi to Sierre Leonne and a lot in between!! :grin :grin
 
don't get this wrong please Uche, but I have found such wide contradictions in the ordinary people, not the bloody militias or para-military's but ordinary people and the goverments and the so called elite 
 
my own view is that is that the probs of Africa MUST be sorted out by African's, God knows the talent , skills and the want of a better future is there in ordinary people 
 
we need to create a leval playing field re the export of African Farming produce for a start, investment in home grown industry is another way the west could help, 
 
but then again maybe I am just a dreamer. 
 
Take Care Mate. 
Bernie 

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item