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| Underground: 16:05 to Cockfosters | |
| By no1butClo | ||||||||||||||||||||
| 15 July 2007 | ||||||||||||||||||||
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A little weird, alightly awkward, n'est pas? Comments needed, gratefully received, and will be returned, I've been in london since my holidays started so time has been scarce! But it has resulted in this offering... The single man stares, with the hint of a scowl, as far as the wall in front of him while an outsized couple noisily affirm their attraction about six inches from his nose. Folded arms and slack face draw a blank and force the onlooker to seek more behind his eyes than is apparent, or there at all, perhaps. Casual, self-contained he leans back against the wall, and wishes the gentleman in him had let him find a seat. Turning his head, he tracks the conduit wiring with eyes that still seem thoughtless. The one red cable he follows 'til the lights come on and tiles appear outside, adverts and ripped posters. The back-ends of rats dare him to prefer the dark. To mind the gap is contrary to his thinking, but he obeys and steps safely, just a little off the beat of a hundred other feet. Out of synch enough to turn and make a dash for the tiles across the track, just in front of the 16:05, to Cockfosters.
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