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| With This Ring | |
| By ToniBowling | ||||||||
| 15 July 2007 | ||||||||
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I wrote this for my sister's boss when she got married as a wedding present. With this ring I give you my love and heart, I give you all of me and I pray we are never apart. With this ring I give you myself to cherish and to love, Each and every day I thank God up above. With this ring I give you everything you want and need, I give you what I feel towards you in these words I read. With this ring I give you my solemn vow, To always feel the same as I do now. With this ring I give you my time and devotion, I give you all of this without so much a commotion. You are my life, you are my lover, and you are my best friend, As long as we are together our love will know no end. I pledge my eternal love to you with this ring, As I place this ring on your hand I can hear the angels sing. So with this ring I now become you wife, So now our journey begins and so does our life.
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