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Poetry
Mistletoe
By Fledermaus
17 July 2007
Poor Balder was slain by you
Oh little white mistletoe
But I wish I had you near
To reduce some of my fear
For I am not very sure
Just how long I can endure
She loves me? She loves me not?
How I love her... Such a lot


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Ah!
Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 17th July 2007
lovely little poem.

Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 17th July 2007
Thanks audrie :)

Written by Phil (6838 comments posted) 17th July 2007
Okay, you're doing this deliberately. First I don't know who Etzel was, and now Balder.  
 
With Audrie 
 
Phil
Balder
Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 17th July 2007
Hi Phil. 
Balder is the Nordic god of the day. He was accidently slain by his blind brother Hod, the god of the night, when he tossed a branch of mistletoe at him. It doesn't bare a connection to the rest of the poem, but somehow I had to think of it. 
Blame Loki...
Written by patterjack (1328 comments posted) 18th July 2007
... of course --- there's always one , isn't there ! 
 
I read of Baldur in this Faroese spelling , many years ago . 
 
er, sp -- bear not bare 
 
patterjack

Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 20th July 2007
Thanks patterjack. 
Baldur, Balder, Baldr... I have no idea of what the correct spelling is actually, but you know whom I meant ;)

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