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| The Retreat | |
| By maipenrai | ||||||||||||
| 19 July 2007 | ||||||||||||
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violent content. we had walked for days unwashed, unshaven, tired exhausted in mind and body we needed shelter and rest, as we approached the village respite seemed at hand, but we stopped something was amiss. we had fought and we had lost and were now in retreat, our enemy in pursuit of the remmants of our once proud force, yet still we stopped, in these hill villages you are first greeted by the dogs then by the half starved children, but now,nothing but silence greeted our arrival. our senses alert we moved forward, slowly then the smell hit us, God, what a awful stench of death and dacay, of bloated bodies, young and old, they had placed the heads of our comrades on poles eyes and tongues removed, notes were attached to the poles "go now heathen, go now and never return to this holy land" we moved through the village in silence, each of us within himself, we had been spared for what reason we would never know, of our comrades that followed nothing was ever heard, strange thing to tell but on leaving the village the wind chimes began to chime, I like to think it was the souls of our comrades bidding us farewell.
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