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Golden spurs
By Fledermaus
24 July 2007
The year 1302, near Kortrijk... I once read "The lion of Flanders", by Hendrik Conscience (written in 1838) which relates of this battle and the events preceding it. I think it's the greatest historical novel ever written in Dutch.
As soon as I had finished reading it, I wanted to go to Flanders, to see where it had all happened... Here's my own little attempt to write something about it.

Hooves thunder upon green fields
The caparisons waving
Golden rays upon helmets
The nobility of France
All assembled for the fight
The fleur-de-lis is raised high
The poor peasants are trampled
As the kingdom rushes on

Citizens clench their sharp pikes
Good day, they call their weapons
For the Lion of Flanders
For shield and friend and freedom
The cruel royal yoke cast off
Brutally slaughtered at night
Their garissons are wiped out
The people's army marches

That terrible summer's day
The green, green fields of Flanders
Turn red with the knights' blood
Thousands fall, freedom gained
Merciless, no chivalry
As they take no prisoners
Golden spurs lay in the grass
Scattered proof of vanity

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Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 24th July 2007
I really like how this ends. The last line has a power all of its own. 
 
Flanders has a history of bloody battle then? 
 
Phil
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Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 25th July 2007
excellent

Written by Fledermaus (3307 comments posted) 25th July 2007
Thanks Phil and maipenrai. 
 
Oh yes, Flanders has a very bloody history. Somehow every great European power likes to fight its conflicts over there...

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