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Poetry
Romeo
By Rob88
25 July 2007
For someone special

People call me Romeo
Because I dare to dream.
I dream about so many things,
I dream of you and me.

I often say I love you,
You know how much I care.
The dream I have for you and me,
Is a dream I'ld like to share.

I dream about our future,
When this will be our past.
I dream about our future,
One I hope will last.

I'ld tell you that I'ld be there every single day.
To me you really mean the world,
I love you more than life.
Like in the play I'ld die for you if you were not around.


But eternity isn't long enough.


Romeo

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Written by Phil (6838 comments posted) 25th July 2007
Sorry Rob - the unrelenting metre of this got in the way for me. I don't know how old you are - but you may remember Frank Spencer. He used to make up rhymes to this rhythm - difficult to see beyond that - sorry. 
 
Phil.

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