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Poetry
Free Speech
By hutmaster
25 July 2007
Checked consonants spurt and splutter,
shuttering wisdom, stopping talk.
It rattles - trapped behind an ersatz grin
seeking relief of articulation;
satisfaction of eloquence which
will.
not
come.
Eyes burn, turn up, turn aside,
seem far off, lost to sense.
Sweat slicks twitching lips,
gripped tongue reneges,
uncompliant.
Nothing.
No word.
Absurd silence.
Staunched. Dammed.

Pent too long, too long
a song of sound gushes.
Rushing.
Pulsing.
Pushed through
tense, tender mouth.
Clicking ticks of noise
drum on clotted air.
Stacatto words pit,
pit-patter
scatter hushed pity,
pock punished air
between
him and all who hear
the rattling,
prattling,
prickling
stick of words booming and bombing,
patterning this gift of free speech

Reviews

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 25th July 2007
Liked this, some of the short lines punctuated the rhythm successfully and gave the piece a very oral/read aloud feeling. What you were aiming for I assume. 
 
Enjoyed. 
 
Phil.

Written by Fledermaus (3301 comments posted) 25th July 2007
That's a pretty litteral interpretation of the concept. Very intersting.

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