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This isn't realy a short-story, but I made up a bunch of characters
years ago, and unfortunately they began to grow into Mary-Sues. The idea
was to make an online comic, with a bit of a drama-series plot.
I've grown to love the characters too much though, and it's pretty hard
to write anything about them. Today I decided that if I want this idea
to become something at all, I have to start somewhere... NB. Some of the characters have weird names, because this started out as a comic. Any ideas and criticism are very welcome. Sasja picked up the glasses and took them to the kitchen. There she froze. Sonya and Bit were celebrating their new life together in their own fashion. They were in eachother's arms, kissing tenderly, obvously unaware of the younger sister's presence. She placed the glasses on the sink and tried to slip out unnoticed, but just as she had turned around, she could hear Sonya's voice. " Are you enjoying yourself?" " Uhm... Yes. It's a great party." " I noticed you can get along well with Jimmie?" " Oh yes, he seems very nice. And smart..." Sonya looked at her boyfriend with a conspiring gaze. It made Sasja feel slightly uncomfortable, especially when Bit returned the gaze with a meaningful smile. " What?" " Oh nothing. But we just said to eachother how much the two of you have in common." Sasja frowned. " And..." " Nothing. We just wondered..." " Wondered about what?" " Well, he is nice, handsome and smart... Single..." " I don't need a boyfriend if that's what you were thinking." " Oh we weren't thinking anything, were we Bit? Let's get the snacks from the oven. The guests must be hungry." Sasja walked back into the living-room. The only free seat was the one on the couch next to Jimmie, but she wasn't too sure if she wanted to take that now. Who knew what they had told him about her?
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