READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 1500 guests online and 2 members online
Poetry
Life III
By Phil
26 July 2007
Just a silly one.

Live life to the full when you’re married,

Live life to full when you’re not.

‘Cos at the end of it all

When the veil starts to fall

They’ll bury you deep down to rot.

Reviews
Looks like I've
Written by Seagull (174 comments posted) 26th July 2007
started a new poetic movement! 
 
V funny Phil 
 
Cheers 
 
Chris 
 
wise
Written by fellpony (1616 comments posted) 26th July 2007
and why not? Liked it.

Written by Fledermaus (3301 comments posted) 26th July 2007
Nice combination of "memento mori" and "carpe diem". see they can go together after all?

Written by gshelme (152 comments posted) 26th July 2007
Yeah, I liked this too :)  
 
Gill

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3362 comments posted) 26th July 2007
If your'e trying to cheer me up I think you should know it isn't working. 
So true Phil but what can you do? 
Jane.
my husband said ...
Written by fellpony (1616 comments posted) 26th July 2007
that he would like the last line to read :  
 
"they'll bury you, whether or not."  
 
(I think it's the antibiotics, myself. Either that or the pneumonia.)

Written by LynB (435 comments posted) 26th July 2007
I really liked this, Phil. Short, and to the point! :grin

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item