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Summer (The First Time)
By Seagull
28 July 2007
With apologies to Bobby Goldsboro for the title.

Young was the spurting buck
that met you in the dark;
I spilt my seed between your thighs
That evening in the park.


Desire flamed within my loins,
I spurned the covered sheen.
We thrusted wildly on the grass
when you were just sixteen.


When next we met the sun was high.
I gloried in your tender kiss,
and once again I filled your womb;
repaid with lust your sweet caress.


Happy were we all the while
we spent upon the sand.
And though my love, you did beguile;
we'd made our final stand.

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Written by Phil (6388 comments posted) 29th July 2007
Feeling nostalgic Chris? 
 
A seedy yet sweet (not the word I was looking for - but it will have to do) feel to this. 
 
Phil.
Nostalgic.... ?
Written by Seagull (174 comments posted) 3rd August 2007
Hmm. I fall back on the artist and the art are separable defence, (whatever that means!)

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