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The Last Blog (4)
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The Last Blog (4)
by 1950strangers » Mon Jun 11, 2012 6:21 am
Weeded out, sorry.
Last edited by 1950strangers on Mon Aug 13, 2012 9:13 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: The Last Blog (4)
by Sooz » Mon Jun 11, 2012 5:50 pm
written by a clerk, trained and cuddled to high society by his employer, this is lovely. Cuddled to high society is a great phrase.
Guess what? No niggles at all with this one. Lots of hooks and things brewing. It's all good and I'll be looking out for the next one.
Guess what? No niggles at all with this one. Lots of hooks and things brewing. It's all good and I'll be looking out for the next one.
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