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written in blood

Postby Ilovebooks » Wed Nov 30, 2011 11:55 pm

Written In Blood

All along the dusty deep walls they hang
crashing , flying horror raging screams
to late to little to say, their loved one's name
deep with thoughts please this is a dream
but the power struggles on and on
nothing left of this divided warrior as it seems
risen from the dead to bring one's head
he rides in blood

Fall outs , less on food
cries of children stripped and guarded
from their childhood
he rides in blood
take of the night who once saw the site.
that stole he life long light. Stung maybe bitten
in cold hearted blood his death was written
Ilovebooks
 

Re: written in blood

Postby Sue » Thu Dec 01, 2011 10:55 am

Pardon? He? They?

This doesn't make sense, grammatically or poetically.
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