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The sun rises

Postby Ilovebooks » Tue Dec 06, 2011 4:42 am

the sunrsise over my head
the moon goes in the morning straigh to bed
eery animal is wide awake
sleep and slumber they shake

day is a new
how we came to eachother thats how i knew
that you are my sunshine and i your day
we fit together in almost every way

the sun shines bright n cold
blazes warmth in ties to bold
the sun rises
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Re: The sun rises

Postby Sue » Wed Dec 07, 2011 1:53 pm

Dear Ilovebooks... I don't think you realise that this forum is for discussing poetry in general - forms, techniques, etc. It's not for posting your own work. That should go into the Poetry forum.

Also, it is customary to review other people's work on the site as well as posting yours. You have only written two words on anyone else's (and one of those was spelt wrong.)
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Re: The sun rises

Postby Deadspidereye » Wed Dec 07, 2011 2:39 pm

Yeah I’m aware of his French publishing career as I think most folk are who haven’t skipped the foreword on their edition is, thanks.
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Re: The sun rises

Postby Sue » Wed Dec 07, 2011 3:19 pm

:?:
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