Hi Debs
I liked this story - it kept my interest and I thought the effort of trying to kill the man in order to get somewhere warm and dry was an interesting idea.
Short stories
Gaol Bird
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Re: Gaol Bird
by jean.day » Sat Jun 23, 2012 8:02 pm
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Re: Gaol Bird
by Deborahhambrook » Mon Jun 25, 2012 2:22 pm
Hi Jean. I'm glad the story kept your interest and that you liked the idea of it. I still have a lot of work to do on this, so your comments make me feel it's worthwhile.
Thank you,
Deb x
Thank you,
Deb x
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