Sue that really is running with the exercise and making something of it. The voices were just right (the line about the child's photographs 'all looking up people's noses' is so simple it is inspired.
The way you have it would suggest it suiting radio perhaps, but it would be nice to see this piece develop. It is of course very poignant. Thanks, all the best.
Brett
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Final May Open Workshop Day - Hurrah!
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Re: Final May Open Workshop Day - Hurrah!
by Brett » Sat May 21, 2011 11:44 pm
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Re: Final May Open Workshop Day - Hurrah!
by Sue » Sat May 21, 2011 11:50 pm
Ta, that line is a direct quote 
Incidentally, the implications in the latter half aren't true and I hope won't be, but I know she was very fond of Cody, and maybe still would be if she saw him more often.
Incidentally, the implications in the latter half aren't true and I hope won't be, but I know she was very fond of Cody, and maybe still would be if she saw him more often.
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