Tick tock, tick tock time has a boring beat.
I sit here waiting in a cardboard room, praying for the colours to leak.
Suddenly a flash of bright white light, and the room begins to change.
The walls start to drip with rainbow tears, in a moment that's poetically strange.
Is this a dream or pure reality, I beg for the answers please?
Suddenly the walls begin to peel, and I'm deserted on the reckless seas.
Alone in a boat I drift to an island, in search of a human touch.
Surrounded by colour with no one in sight, it's regret thats within my clutch.
Dreaming of colour is a dangerous thing, especially when dreams come true.
Open your mind to illusions and reality, and common sense will push on through.
Poetry
Wishful Thinking
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Re: Wishful Thinking
by peter » Thu Jun 14, 2012 8:33 pm
Hello.. I would have thought you would have had quite a few comments on this .. Reminds me of a mushroom trip I had a long long time ago . It probably disturbs people who think to logically . Anyway enjoy ..
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