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Re: How to Choke a Horse
by Deborahhambrook » Sun Jul 01, 2012 9:45 am
Excellent! Where to now?
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Re: How to Choke a Horse
by Brett » Sun Jul 01, 2012 9:46 am
Said it before - one of the strongest pieces I've read on here in a while!
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Re: How to Choke a Horse
by Ben Allen » Sun Jul 01, 2012 12:03 pm
Effective on the page and even more so when read aloud.
I remember the question was about apathy, I thought it was o.k but I can see the change for the better (or even better!)
Powerful poem.
Ben
I remember the question was about apathy, I thought it was o.k but I can see the change for the better (or even better!)
Powerful poem.
Ben
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Re: How to Choke a Horse
by WendyPratt » Sun Jul 01, 2012 6:31 pm
Hello again
I really like what you have done with this, it's taught, tight, strengthened. This is a very good piece of writing.
Thanks for re-posting it with all your hard work.
Wendy
I really like what you have done with this, it's taught, tight, strengthened. This is a very good piece of writing.
Thanks for re-posting it with all your hard work.
Wendy
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Re: How to Choke a Horse
by bwoz » Wed Jan 30, 2013 6:05 am
Hi all,
in case I forgot to say (write) it before, many thanks for the fantastic critques -- well thought, and thoughtful.
I got so wrapped up in other things lately I might have skipped over, unintentionally, acknowledging the great support you all provide.
cheers
BW
in case I forgot to say (write) it before, many thanks for the fantastic critques -- well thought, and thoughtful.
I got so wrapped up in other things lately I might have skipped over, unintentionally, acknowledging the great support you all provide.
cheers
BW
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