Time.

[Swampy Bob]

Tonight I spent a little time,
Reminiscing about times past,
Time well spent with those we love,
And how time goes by so fast,
Time is unforgiving,time swiftly moves along,
We must use the precious time we have,
To enjoy our time before it's gone.

[Brett]

I couldn't agree with the sentiment more.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aHKCPorc ... re=related

Hwyl fawr

Brett

[Ben Allen]

Nicely written, Bob.

Something we'd do well to remember but so often forget (sounds like I got that comment out of a birthday card or something!)

Ben

[Swampy Bob]

Thanks guys,

Tonight your comments mean a lot.Ain't time a funny thing?Sometimes I spend hours writing pure shit that I think is funny at the time.Tonight I spent all of half a minute writing this,it came from my heart,I was thinking about seeing my old mum next week..

Cheers

S.B

[peter]

Hello . A short rymne , in a long`u`age of time .

[Swampy Bob]

Hi Peter,

Thanks for your review,I'm so sorry, you must be new (no cheesey rhyme intended), I guess i spend too much time drinking,and not enough reading and reviewing, I shall address this as a matter of urgency. But I am confused by your comment, what the hell does long`u`age mean?

Please excuse my ignorance,

S.B

[peter]

Hello. curiosity doesn`t need an excuse . if more people asked questions we would all understand each other better . long`u` age is your language as well as your personal life time . hence I could have said , a short rhymne , in your language of time . I just like playing with words , not trying to confuse . Keep writing and drinking , you seem to have a good sense of humour .

[WendyPratt]

Very true and well said.X

[Swampy Bob]

Thank You Wendy x

S.B