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Re: general observation

Postby peter » Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:22 pm

HELLO . His masters voice speaks, woof woof . Why not question your own answers, because your actually proving to everyone , what I observed but if you enjoy what your doing , carry on .ps .I'm glad you weren`t my English teacher at school .
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Re: general observation

Postby Brett » Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:28 pm

HMV (apostrophe in 'master's' ;) )- me? Hardly. I'm glad I wasn't a teacher either.

Not sure where your hostility has come from but that is your choice and opinion. Good luck with your writing.

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Re: general observation

Postby peter » Fri Jun 15, 2012 5:11 pm

Hello . I'm not being hostile . This is my way of trying to get you to see , it doesn`t make any difference how we write, or the subject . Life should be funny and compassionate . It serves no purpose with people just trying to express themselves . That`s why I've given good positive review to everything I've looked at .. A lot of the uncommented work deserves as good a welcome as the olde hands . That`s when everyone benefits and it becomes a thriving creative community . What`s wrong with bring the best out of people , helping then achieve potential , how they choose to do it .. Strange enough , I've had more reviews on this , than all my pieces put together . maybe it should just be deleted and you can all move on . Either that just throw me off the website , i`m not here to divide and create conflict .
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Re: general observation

Postby Brett » Fri Jun 15, 2012 5:21 pm

The site is also for honest crit - and I'm honest in my opinions. I will also say that I have learned more from negative reviews than any such 'Wow, I liked this' comments. Yes, life should be fun - it is in fact! If people wish to develop their writing then they should be open to criticism, if they only wish to post here for fun with no intention of improving the pieces posted then they do not have to take such criticism on board.
I've been a regular to this site since 2008 so please don't go judging me on what you've read in your short time or think I don't welcome newcomers.

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Re: general observation

Postby peter » Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:07 pm

Hello . there`s a BRUTAL honesty and nourish mental honesty.It`s easy to DICTATE how long you`ve been on this site , but you didn`t develop the internet or the ALPHBET , pre HIS STORY .. English literature hasn`t even reached adolescence , in the universal world of communication .So if you want to start playing psychological tennis , your going to have to start playing with yourself .
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Re: general observation

Postby Mods » Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:40 pm

just throw me off the website , i`m not here to divide and create conflict .

Dear me, we are getting tetchy. We don't throw people off, Peter, unless they behave like trolls.

What do you want from this purely writing site? Did I read elsewhere that you consider yourself an artist rather than a writer? Wouldn't you be happier somewhere like deviantart?
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Re: general observation

Postby peter » Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:23 pm

hello . your disregarding , the `original` message and just taking sides in what waa , a one to one conversation .. This doesn`t bother me because it gives the poor sods who have been over critised a bit of peace and quiet .
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Re: general observation

Postby Deborahhambrook » Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:24 pm

There's just one other thing I didn't understand, and please excuse my ignorance, but what has - playing with yourself- got to do with tennis?
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Re: general observation

Postby Mods » Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:35 pm

I asked you a civil question, which you haven't answered.

You may not have observed that I am an admin here.
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Re: general observation

Postby peter » Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:40 pm

Hello . some take advantage , while others take the .... .I don`t have a competive nurture , but I will defend what`s common sense . however if someone wants to keep serving critism eventually they are going to have no one to play with but themselves . Hence the term `psychological tennis ..
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