Thanks for posting back, John.
I was worried that the intake of alcohol might have made me a little insensitive.
All the best
Ben.
Poetry
Un Poeme Trouve
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Re: Un Poeme Trouve
by Ben Allen » Sat Jan 07, 2012 11:57 pm
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Re: Un Poeme Trouve
by Swampy Bob » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:05 am
get a room you two..lol
S.B
S.B
"All you need in this life are ignorance and confidence,he will by and by convince himself that war is just, and will thank God for the better sleep,let us be thankful for the fools.but for them the rest of us could not succeed".
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Re: Un Poeme Trouve
by Brett » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:19 am
Where found poems are usually found:
Suppositories
Remove from packing,
read instructions.
Place four inches up the rectum,
keep out of the reach of children.
Hwyl fawr
Brett
Suppositories
Remove from packing,
read instructions.
Place four inches up the rectum,
keep out of the reach of children.
Hwyl fawr
Brett
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Re: Un Poeme Trouve
by Swampy Bob » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:22 am
And sheep.
"All you need in this life are ignorance and confidence,he will by and by convince himself that war is just, and will thank God for the better sleep,let us be thankful for the fools.but for them the rest of us could not succeed".
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Re: Un Poeme Trouve
by Sue » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:27 am
Sheep will eat a good many things but I've never known of one eating a suppository 
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Re: Un Poeme Trouve
by Swampy Bob » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:35 am
I stand corrected, by my shit don't stink like a fell ponies' poo, sue.
"All you need in this life are ignorance and confidence,he will by and by convince himself that war is just, and will thank God for the better sleep,let us be thankful for the fools.but for them the rest of us could not succeed".
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Re: Un Poeme Trouve
by Sue » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:41 am
I'll post you some for comparison if you like 
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Re: Un Poeme Trouve
by Swampy Bob » Sun Jan 08, 2012 12:51 am
Yes please I will not find the camparison hard,
I would rather eat shit than be a dullard.
S.B xx
I would rather eat shit than be a dullard.
S.B xx
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Re: Un Poeme Trouve
by Sooz » Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:58 pm
Sorry, this one didn't do a lot for me, either. But I agree with the sentiment, what makes a poem. Why is this any less of one than something with every second and fourth line rhyming. It's witty in its irony.
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