Poetry
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by lee » Mon Feb 20, 2012 1:46 am
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Re: Virtual Reversal (revised)
by lee » Mon Feb 20, 2012 1:48 am
I tried to strengthen this a bit. Mirrors can be very dangerous.
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Re: Virtual Reversal (revised)
by DarcEdge » Mon Feb 20, 2012 4:45 am
This was very descriptive and the stroy carries the reader along. I liked the visuals here.
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