Short stories
Ships that pass in the night
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Ships that pass in the night
by SylvesterG » Sat Mar 10, 2012 3:48 pm
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Last edited by SylvesterG on Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Ships that pass in the night
by Ben Allen » Mon Mar 19, 2012 10:43 pm
I enjoyed reading this.
Well detailed descriptive writing with a feeling that the writer is searching for more expressive kinds of words to describe the person that they are are seeing, even though they have already detailed well.
Nicely made into a very readable short story.
Ben.
Well detailed descriptive writing with a feeling that the writer is searching for more expressive kinds of words to describe the person that they are are seeing, even though they have already detailed well.
Nicely made into a very readable short story.
Ben.
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Re: Ships that pass in the night
by SylvesterG » Tue Mar 20, 2012 6:03 pm
Thank you Ben for commenting on this. The story is based on fact. The only thing I ‘invented’ is the IMG, which does the subject of the piece no justice. Nor does my description of her.
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